Sunday, July 19, 2009

empty space

there is a hollowness in me,
when i miss you,
but i don't know if you do,
when i love you,
but you never say you do,
i clinch my heart tight,
stopping it from ballooning
from sorrow and emptiness,
its space characterised by
an eerie concave of nothingness,
but it seems to swell worst
as time propels onwards,
i fear there is no cure;
to an empty space of hollowness

4 comments:

Jarod Yong said...

Sometimes a woman denies what she knows.

J. (popstarjerry@aim.com) said...

I know that I love you
but something is missing
I grasp my chest tightly
as I think of us kissing
What's been done to me
has made me a man
one who forgives
and one who understands
I've used my innocence
for you to love me deeper
I've took control of your soul
like a grim reaper
I'm truly truly sorry
old thoughts got older
I remember what you did
and my heart just grew colder
I thought I forgave
just like Jesus did
but I've been seeking revenge
watching when to bid
I don't want this anymore
I want to be free!
for I realized ur not the prisoner
the prisoner is me

hey Ana, I've been hurt so much in the pass and I don't remember the last time I ever wrote down my feelings but you inspired me to do so and I thank you for that! I'm free!

J. (popstarjerry@aim.com) said...

I know that I love you
but something is missing
I grasp my chest tightly
as I think of us kissing
What's been done to me
has made me a man
one who forgives
and one who understands
I've used my innocence
for you to love me deeper
I've took control of your soul
like a grim reaper
I'm truly truly sorry
old thoughts got older
I remember what you did
and my heart just grew colder
I thought I forgave
just like Jesus did
but I've been seeking revenge
watching when to bid
I don't want this anymore
I want to be free!
for I realized ur not the prisoner
the prisoner is me

hey Ana, I've been hurt so much in the pass and I don't remember the last time I ever wrote down my feelings but you inspired me to do so and I thank you for that! I'm free!

Ana Shirin said...

wow, i didn't expect this.. good for you, j :)